Tuesday, 15 November 2016

Teacher's Comments


8 comments:

  1. Research and Planning
    Your research and planning are only partially complete. Your analysis of codes and conventions is relatively thorough and well presented, although you fail to mention any of the theorists you have studied or integrate these into your comments.
    You have used your focus group to answer one question and you have conducted no research into your target audience.
    11/20

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    1. I will make some changes to my research and planning

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  2. Main Task
    Your main task is not uploaded. You will not receive a grade unless it is available tomorrow.

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  3. Evaluation
    Your evaluation is not uploaded. You will not receive a grade unless it is available tomorrow.

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    1. I am currently finishing it up so I will put it up as soon as it is done

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  4. Main Task
    There is evidence of a basic level of ability in the creative use of ICT and in the understanding of layout and page design. Although each task suffers from a lack of photographic material more appropriate to the task. Texts need to be more varied in size and variety.
    30/60

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  5. Evaluation
    Your evaluation is complete and proficient.
    Your presentation however is difficult to navigate. The copy is long and would benefit from sub-heads. You show understanding of the relevant technologies and trace your progress clearly.
    12/20

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